A spooky description by Regan Swain 

September 27, 2017

Mysteriously, the colossal silhouette shone as if there was a huge figure in front of it. In every minute of every day, the old forbidden house was always towering over everything within its distance. Unexpectedly, the illumininous light gloomed upon the windows that had been matted in moss. Silently, the other ten windows were destroyed into diminutive pieces. The stone gargoyles stood statuesque as though the lightning had struck amongst them, and without a sound they gazed amongst the main land with wrought iron gates surrounding it. Hardly out of breath, the valiant man leapt across each and every grave that was smothered in grass. 

  

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  •    sophia griffin  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:49 pm     Reply

    well done Regan very good description of a spooky setting.

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  •    Hayley Biggy  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:50 pm     Reply

    Well done Regan! Your spooky description was great! I really enjoyed reading it! 🙂

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  •    Millie Brook  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:51 pm     Reply

    Well done Regan. Your description was great.

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  •    Chloe Hill  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:52 pm     Reply

    Well done Regan!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  •    Isabel Hope  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:52 pm     Reply

    A spooky description Regan . Well Done !

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  •    Paigan Torkington  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:53 pm     Reply

    Well Done Regan! A really good piece of description ! I liked your imagination in the spooky setting.

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  •    Grace Yang  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:53 pm     Reply

    well done regan

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  •    lucas wood  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:55 pm     Reply

    where’s your smile Regan. only joking.

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  •    Izzy Bailey  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:56 pm     Reply

    Well done Regan!

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  •    jayne doran  |  September 27th, 2017 at 1:56 pm     Reply

    excellent description Regan !!!!

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  •    Billy Shaw  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:30 pm     Reply

    Wow! I love your use of ly openers!

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  •    zack  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:37 pm     Reply

    well done regan did a great job on that opening op story

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  •    matthew davies  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:38 pm     Reply

    I LOVE how you described were your setting was and who was in it

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  •    Billy Shaw  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:39 pm     Reply

    amazing job Regan XD

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  •    Lola knowles  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:40 pm     Reply

    Well done Regan keep it up

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  •    harley ledsham  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:40 pm     Reply

    wow great description keep it up :]

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  •    Sienna Jones  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:41 pm     Reply

    Well Done Regan!!! I loved the description !!!

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  •    Jack Bridge  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:44 pm     Reply

    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#spookay

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  •    selena saxon  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:44 pm     Reply

    WELL DONE!!!!!!!!
    you’ve done so good. Got so much good words I can hardly read them!!!!!!!

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  •    April Bradshaw  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:45 pm     Reply

    great work! like your word choices 🙂

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  •    Daniel desousa  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:46 pm     Reply

    WELL DONE!!!;):)

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  •    Callum  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:46 pm     Reply

    I like your openers

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  •    Katie  |  September 27th, 2017 at 2:47 pm     Reply

    love your work 10 out of 10

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  •    Jake Davies  |  September 27th, 2017 at 3:50 pm     Reply

    Well done Regan good ly words!

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  •    Emma Mccall  |  September 27th, 2017 at 5:29 pm     Reply

    well done Regan really good gave me the shivers

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